Yes, I can go on the ride that I want to go on.
I was taller than the line for the roller coaster ride. 3, 2, 1, go!!!
I could feel the wind blowing in my face, my stomach was rising to my brain.
I was taller than the line for the roller coaster ride. 3, 2, 1, go!!!
I could feel the wind blowing in my face, my stomach was rising to my brain.
Next was the scariest, most horrifying of all. The fare fall.
I could not breathe. The cars were like ants from up here.
The drop made me hold my breath butterflies filling up my body .
I could not breathe. The cars were like ants from up here.
The drop made me hold my breath butterflies filling up my body .
Finally the stratosphere had me guessing.
Up and up and up and then AAAHHHH!
The buildings rushed past like a blur, my stomach raced up to my mouth.
When would we stop.
Up and up and up and then AAAHHHH!
The buildings rushed past like a blur, my stomach raced up to my mouth.
When would we stop.
Wow Donnie, what awesome show sentences. Well done!
ReplyDelete- Whaea Kelly
Kia Ora Donnie, I love the DLO you chose to go with your writing. Would you go on that ride again? I think I would just watch. Looking forward to seeing your next post.
ReplyDeleteNa Mrs Stevenson
wow that DLO loooks cool
ReplyDeleteHi Donnie I'm Arli from PCS
ReplyDeleteI like how descriptive your writing is and how you added a picture.